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don't even think about coming for dessert burnt sugar glaciers stand well on their own vinegar gingerbread break his legs off remembering one grain of salt on your lip but ...

Hi there! First of all: brilliant concept. I have to say that right away. I love, love, love what you're going for here. I do think that you could execute ...

Hiya, Pretty much what Teo said. Great idea, but this is a little too short and undeveloped to be a poem. It really needs some details to give it substance. ...

Thank you very much, I really appreciate the feedback! :)

Cruel He looked a little like you and his eyes were something like yours and even though I knew, I ducked between the shelves to trace the spines with trembling ...

Hello, kookie1993. Just so you know, you're supposed to review at least two pieces for every poem or story you submit. Since you're new, it's no big deal that you ...

Hi Brushfire! Just to let you know, the rule is to do two reviews for every poem or story you post. Since you're new, it's fine that you didn't know ...

Just finished Breathless by The Corrs. I actually hate that song. Moving on to Flavor by Tori Amos.

I love these. She has so much good advice.

10/10 for Ella Fitzgerald. 1. White Flag - Dido 2. Little Universe - Charlotte Martin 3. Watching You Without Me - Kate Bush 4. Aerial - Kate Bush 5. Crucify ...

Does anyone have any good tips for creating a strong atmosphere or sense of place? I'd appreciate hearing them, as this is something I'm trying to improve. :)

Mississippi Like running water rips a stone apart atom by atom, it happened slowly. Well, he always was as sure of himself as the Mississippi. She didn’t realize something had ...

Hi, unicyclegurl! :D One quick thing before I talk about your poem: the site rules are that you should critique at least two poems before you post one of your ...

Hey there Zalarus. :) I think this is a good poem, and I like it a lot. You've used some nice turns of phrase. I've gone through it line-by-line below. ...

Thanks so much for the crit, Mars! :) I'll think about the stanza thing.