Scorpia

The title got my attention, it's great. I had to say it a few times because it sounds so cool, "The Eyes of the Empire, The EYES of the Empire!" ...

Ii liked it, the action was good. Work on your grammer some, listen to the comments these guys are making, they'll help you a lot. The better your grammer is ...

I laughed at Avens comment, because I was thingking the same thing. "Harry Potter, woot, woot!" It was not Harry though, lol. It was good. I kinda felt like Harry ...

There are seven books in the series. Stormbreaker, Point Blanc, Skelton Key, Eagle Strike, Scorpia, Ark Angel and Snakehead. There great. Lyrical, you should read the books, SO much better ...

I think this should be in poetry. It's not fanfiction unless you are writing it about a character in a movie/book/comic/, not a person. That would be poetry, so it ...

Lol, No! How could you, i was more like, "Don't you DARE kill him Horowitz!" Everyone thought it was the end of the series, lol. I did as well, had ...

ROFL, great. You should post this on if you have not already. I like Meyer but I'm able to take aj oke, and this was funny! I loved the part ...

Thanks Nate, I'll do that!

I am a huge fan of the series, my penname even comes from the title of the fifth book! Alex is such an interesting character, I also love the K ...

I LOVE the Keyes To The Kingdom series, they are original fantasy. The characters are great and although it sometimes gets confusing to me if I don't re-read the books ...

How do the points work? Thanks, Scorpia

The sound of hurried footsteps echoed in empty corridor. Torches on the other wise bare walls were the only thing pervading light. A slim teenaged boy with raven-colored hair over ...

I liked it, good writing. I think I would explain what was happening in more detail. Maybe explain the sitouation more.

ROFL, Hey Elise! So cool to run into you here! You already know that I like your story. It was kind of weird that Severus was talking to himself. He ...

Hey everyone, I'm Moriyah or as my pen name says, Scorpia. I absolutely love to read. Anthony Horowitz is a favorite of mine along with the Harry Potter series. I'm ...