Scorpia

I loved the ripped skin around the coller, it shows how long the dragon has had to wear that stupid chain. It's kind of cartooney. I like it though. Good ...

Photo is very clear, i like that. Hehe, don't know where it's from but I like it, :)

You drew on your wall, my parents would KILL me, lol. I thinks it's to dark. the first or second pic is the best. You can sew the tendrils of ...

Great job, I love your signiture in the corner. My name starts with a M, maybe I'll borrow your's if you don't mind. It's so much easier then my usual ...

Like the flowers the most, there is a brown...thingy, leaf maybe, on one of the rose leaves. I would of brushed it off but beside that teeney weeney thing, the ...

The snow need to show a bit more, congrats on getting snow in your state, lol. It's a pretty pic, but the power lines were bothersome. Like little flys that ...

Beautiful. One eye looks likes it's completly black, or a borg eye. And the nose is a little large. But other then that it was lovely. I can never get ...

Great job, I thought the detail was wondeful. Don't know if it really looks like the guy you based it on though since I have never seen him before, lol. ...

Very cool! I like the normal face better, tjhe other part looks kind of freakily cool though, lol. I also LOVE the Artimus Fowl books in the background of the ...

It was three o’clock in the morning when the power went out on King’s Road. The street flickered off and the little light they had provided went with them. No ...

I loved it Elise, really good. You can write poetry! And beautiful poetry at that, :) Please keep it up, listen to these guysandtheir pointers. I would give you some ...

It was very good, I liked it. I felt really bad for Cathy, I REALLY want to hurt Jordy. Torture him, poor Mischa. How did she get in a relationship ...

I would add more detailto the first conversation buty besides that, it was pretty good. Yes, it has potential if handled correctly. The character was okay, funny which is always ...

Add more detail, what pain was she feeling, where is she at. Things like that. It was not too confusing, since I have not read the rest of the story ...

Things were taken kind of fast. I would make it longer, it would be easy. {She wasn’t quite enjoying being hit} Hello Mr. Obvious. This in uneeded I think. Who ...