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Re: The Beggar
Shabby clothes meander along the concrete jungle's rivers' banks, carrying within them the forgotten shell of what used to be a cherished soul. Driven on by need, and only by ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: O Smoke and Mirrors
Thanks to the both of you for time, I really appreciate the reviews! I separated the poem into separate stanzas, as was suggested, and went along and started some lines ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: O Smoke and Mirrors
This is a little poem I wrote to vent some of my teenage angst :wink: I have a tendency to write with a more Shakespearean view on pronouns, so bear ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Stranger
Sorry to be the voice of contradiction Loredean, but "its" in its possessive form does not have an apostrophe. Only if it is a contraction for "it is" will it ...
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: In the Arms of the Angel: a Short Story
Hey, I apologize if my critique isn't totally full-fleshed, I'm not the best at critiquing the works of other, let alone my own! ;P "the sole occupant of a shining ...
Apr 7, 2010
