SciFiGirl

Well it depends on what the story is about.You could maybe say that she loved bananas or something along those lines. Anna Banana? It's a little cheesy but it's catchy. ...

Tell me if this is any good. I think it might be a little dry and repetitive. They say that you are a child. They say you are inexperienced. I ...

HI. :P I thought that this piece was really good. The rhythm was really good. There was an easy to follow flow through the piece and was really easy to ...

Hey. I myself am not the best poetry writer so I am most likely going to wrong about some things but, I hope this helps. I thought this piece was ...

They say that you are just a child. They say that you don't know enough. They say that you are not experienced. They say that you are not ready. I ...

That really sounds cool. I could try to help you out. If you need any help. Good luck.

I too feel what you feel. Why should you let someone who you don't even know exists run your life. Why should he make the decisions in life for you. ...

I think it's pretty good. not the fact that you got a pretty good taste of pain in order to write it, but the actual poem itself. There is a ...

You are right. It's not the best peice of poetry in the world. But it's not the worst. You can still picture and feel the emotion. It could be worse. ...

You're right life stinks... Great poetry I can almost feel the anger and frustration that was put into the work.