Schemilix

As I said, thanks. I wonder if here's the place to post a link to a sketch of Captain Rage for anyone reading?

Oh yeah I know the real story of the tarot, Fool---->World etc. This ones story isn't the story of the tarot, rather the story of my CHARACTERS whom I have ...

Rosey: Yeah, as to who's speaking... I think it's quite clear: there's 'a voice' and then 'the speaker' and then his description. >_> As for that non-dialogue puntuation guide I ...

Thanks. And yeah, it is confusing, but oh well. Considering I've never come even close to such endeavours, I was relying on my characters. xD

I have replied to each of your reviews in turn, and again, thank you muchly. I would like to point out that the 'the beginning is confusing' criticism is wholly ...

Haha, thankye. I did mention 'the littlest graves' at one point. The grammatical screwery was deliberate, but I can see why it bugs you. Anyway I don't feel the need ...

Don't do the x2 thing just type it out twice. : D Your other one's better. *Fidgets* Down to business. (I saw this on the list so I had a ...

'Tis spelt Alibi, and you typoed second-hand, hehe, just a nitpick. It's very rich. Alive. My first issue: Yikes, you sentences are long. They just run on and on and ...

Yay a fellow escapist reader/writer! We seem to have similar tastes. Ever heard of science fantasy?

Nice. And here we go: 'big ugly worthless crow.' Naw. Too blunt and childish. You can do better, my lad. I like how the crow's sorta giving up, though I ...

Wooooooooooow. You know. Only one thing wrong: 'whispers of a sinless boy come to free her of her sins;' Sinless, sins. Repetition, if intentional, doesn't work. Anyway, thats is literally ...

Looking at your avatar I can't help thinking that the speaker's Sarah with the drugged peach, argh. Erm. Yeah. Anyway. Nice poem. I like the 'but my hands are cold' ...

Pray to the torment, God of the seal of chains in the flesh and knives in the skin, bloodstained god kneels before burnings waves, in the war torn sky from ...

*Nods* I do, somewhere. They fascinate me. As for the capitalisation thing, I didn't capitalise to make it flow and to draw more attention to what I DID capitalise - ...

Goosebumps! Oh my childhood. They were awful, but so addictive. I rmemeber loving the 'make your own goosebumps' ones, though not a single one really scared me. They read like ...