ScarletteRose

Wow! Kylan. Your oxygen tank is on the way! It was back ordered, but it will get to you soon. It's state of the art.

I'm new here, so I don't really have any memories. All I can say that everyone here is awesome! You guys welcomed me and made me feel right at home. ...

I love your take on Cinderella. It is refreshingly different character-wise. I also love that your "step-family" isn't downright evil. More stupid than anything. I'm excited to see where you ...

I love the way you write. It's precise and it flows perfectly. Your main character has a clear voice and your dialogue is sharp. Your characters all stand out and ...

Hi Cassie! I like to get right to the general problems I see and then I'll give you an overall rating. I'm not going to really get into grammar, even ...

This was...extremely over the top. I LURVE over the top. I am a fellow anit-twilighter myself, so I found this extremely enjoyable. My favorite part? When you throw a rock ...

Hello thechocolatewritingcat, So far I didn't really see any issues except a couple of run on sentences and sentence structure issues. I saw one verb agreement issue, but now I ...

Hi Winter's Twelfth Night! I think you did very well. The transition was seamless and your writing is beautiful. The number of semicolons at the beginning bothered me a bit, ...

IT WAS ten hours before dawn. I woke up with a start. Someone was watching me. I wasn't sure who and I didn't know why. All I knew was this ...

Hello Natfunnybunny, I think someone mentioned this before me, but since it's so important I'll say it again. Paragraphs are so important! One big block of text is a total ...

Hello KailaMarie :) I enjoyed your chapter, but as a couple of reviewers before me said: it was just a bit confusing. It would be a lot better if you ...

Hi there Nicole! Welcome to YWS! I love your username! Just thought I'd mention that. Right, so I will begin with the rules. Don't worry, they're not too bad! I. ...

Hi :D My name is Nicole. I am thirteen years old. I have been writing pretty much my whole life, but I just discovered my love for writing six months ...