ScarletteRose

Pure poetry. Skins is right. This doesn't deserve to be picked apart. It's special and perfect just the way it is. The imagery is great and emotion flows right off ...

*Edit: Your poem is ticky. After thinking about it, I know exactly what it's about now. With that in mind, I feel I can be a bit more helpful with ...

This is the second poem, I 've read by you (the first one being Marie Antoinette). I've noticed that you make the most of every word. You don't use words ...

I like all of these, but my favorites are the 3rd and 6th one. I will admit the corners you mentioned in the first photograph really bothered me (before you ...

Hey! Great imagery, but I find myself agreeing with Coral. I wonder what your purpose is in writing this poem. Is it meant to tell of the dangers of aging? ...

Hey Iceprincess! This was cute. At times it was a bit unrealistic as far as word choice goes, but I think you portrayed an intelligent little girl attempting to be ...

I'm a failure. :(

Agreed. One hundred percent.

Ohhh! How exciting! Maybe I can get my next star!

**Sorry it's so short. Empress Carolina "What do you mean he's failed?" I demanded. The messenger ran out of the room. I rolled my eyes. "Take care of him," I ...

Empress Carolina The messenger trembled. I rolled my eyes as he lowered himself to one knee, literally whimpering. What a hardcore pansy. I supposed it was good that my subjects ...

Demi! :) I love this. I felt like you represented the original idea well, but it feels new. The imagery was vivid. By the end of the poem I could ...

DragonRook: Thanks for the criticism! Shepherd: Gah. You caught me. I shot all of these with my 3 mega pixel camera on my phone. My camera is broken and I'm ...

For Lava's Photography contest! Grey: Beyond the Dashboard Gray small.jpg Editing: Dialed down the saturation, along with a bit of sharpening. (Photoshop) Green: The Brush Green Small.jpg Editing: The

Hey Drawers! So, this was interesting. I'm going to leave the grammar and line by line nitpicking to the professionals. I love the description of Tucker. A control freak dog ...