ScarletteRose

Zomg. Yes. In. Yes again.

Hi! This was definitely pretty cool. I love the way it flows. I can feel the frustration in your structure and word choice. It was kind of jilted, in good ...

Chills. I rarely ever get chills, but you've just succeeded. The only thing I would add is the clarification that they were in the car while they were talking. That ...

Gorgeous. I love the way you clued us in on the fact that he is a doctor. The imagery is wonderful. Your use of second person is genius. Most people ...

Hello Tina! That was great. I love how you implied the ending and din't outright say it. It made it that much sweeter. Your flow did fall to the way ...

Hello Aliyah! I'm here to review as requested. This sort of thing isn't really my cup of punch. It's not that I mind romance or death, it's just that I ...

Hey Skins! I finally finished that poem and short story I've been promising! Links: Story: Poem: :) Thanks!

*Edit: No longer for the September contest because I completely forgot it had to be based on a theme from the story generator. (I know. I'm special.) Christian Haines had ...

*Edit: No longer in contest. Felt grass, static smiles Tailored suits in a trendy style A sports car and a sense of pride Because you've crossed to the other side ...

Hello! I really like this. The oxymoron of frozen fire is awesome. The essence of winter has been captured. I do agree with Truth, though. This bit: I know I ...

Hello! This was a very sad poem, however it doesn't make me feel what the narrator is feeling. I feel like a spectator rather than an active participant. I'm watching ...

Hello Warrior Princess, First off I agree with iyaeelz, the title is rather off-putting. It's a bit lackluster. I don't exactly love this because you seem to be describing this ...

Hello Patrick! First of all, hmmm...I liked it. :) It was pretty, but not breathtaking. I expected more from your description of God. Honestly, I would think your character would ...

Hello my dear, It's quite obvious why you have no reviews, it's too awesome for anyone to comprehend. Either that, or they're frightened by the Latin. Anywho, your flow is ...

Hey ryan! First of all, thank you for rhyming. There are not enough poems on YWS that rhyme. (in my opinion) The flow was nice, but I don't like that ...