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Re: We Shall Pen [Now with Guide Track!]
I am having issues because the key is kind of low for me. I recorded it and it sounds like I'm talking :D I'm working on it.
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: An Ode to Tigersprite
Skins. My goodness. This is absolutely hysterically, amazing. I'm even mangling adjective usage because of this poem. No one has attempted to give this a proper review and at first ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Wait, Before You Go
Helloooo Kat, Girl, you have mad skills. That was simply brilliant. I didn't want it end. Your play on words is clever and fresh and your rhyme scheme brings a ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Paolo
Hi Penguin Attack! You have a very interesting poem here. I'm guessing the title has something to do with the guy's name or even just the way he seems to ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: We Shall Pen [Now with Guide Track!]
Will do! I probably didn't have the guide track up loud enough. I'll post them both when I'm done.
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: We Shall Pen [Now with Guide Track!]
Okay. So, here it is. It's kinda pitchy and it really goes downhill from like 30 seconds and on. My syllables were off in a few places and yeah...I can ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for putting the period outside the quotation mark. :D
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for using "banning" as a verb.
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned for being of the female persuasion.
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Make me....I dare you
It's the first chapter of an old novel. It is Sci Fi. Don't be afraid to rip it to shreds. ;) Thank choo!
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Bring it on! (Open)
Hi! I was wondering if you could review the first chapter of this: It's not too long. Just one thousand words or so. Thankies, Lette
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?
Skins, I've come to depend on your reviews... I would like the works. Nitpick and overall :D First chapter of an old novel.
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: [Insert witty title nobody else has thought of]
You give amazingly well thought out and detailed reviews. Just thought I'd mention that I admire your skill. :P
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Corruption - Chapter 1
Square One August 1st, 2022 Raiden almost winced as his father backhanded Sabrina across the cheek. Something was wrong. Sabrina wouldn’t normally let Carson Cartell lay a hand on her. ...
Feb 14, 2011 -
Re: Enough to Please
Hello! You had some really interesting imagery here. I especially loved the imagery of the last two lines. I think you have a really good start. The lyrics are a ...
Feb 10, 2011
