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Re: My father's leave (revision)
i think this is a beautiful and moving poem. it's vivid and blunt, but with amazing word usage. it is something i can totally relate to, and i think you ...
May 5, 2006 -
Re: Hello There Killer
Sickly sweet silver flash in the light blade’s trickle of warm and wet smiles underlined by a depth of kohl shadows wild guesses in the dark of the sun as ...
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Re: Shatter
Innocence drapes me like a white cloak virginity my eyes are pure closed to the passion, the rain of desire drizzling your body My ivory tower is water-proof Yet a ...
May 3, 2006 -
Re: Naked Afternoon
i believe i will have to agree with everyone else. this is brilliant. good word, brilliant. it describes this well, i think.
May 3, 2006 -
Re: Hell is a Place
i personally really enjoyed this. it was short without being abrupt to me, but it was still short enough to be slightly mysterious, and i loved the image it created ...
May 3, 2006 -
Re: who's/what's your fav poet or poetry
Edna St. Vincent Millay is my favorite poet ever, and my favorite poem of all time is "Dirge Without Music" by her. I am not resigned to the shutting away ...
May 3, 2006 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
yes, i said howdy, cuz that's the way we do it here in oklahoma. my name's sara, i'm 14, i'm an athlete and a writer, my sports are soccer and ...
May 3, 2006 -
Re: Encore
that was amazing.
May 3, 2006
