ScarletMonkey

This was cool, it's a different idea to write about parents and I think it's a topic that you wrote about extremely well. I'll let off all the fireworks I ...

Ahhh hopeless romantics... I don't know if I AM one, I do write poems and songs about the girl that i'im currently dating... I once told a girl I was ...

I have very mixed views on Super Mario Galaxy First the positives: It's fun, it's amazing fun, that's what games are for and this is what defines a game. Mario ...

I feel that I should congratulate you You've written one of the best poems I have read so far on this site Congratulations My favourite bit is definitely the contrast ...

I'm going to be honest, I don't get it... I really don't understand the concept of the 'Red Star', I'm thinking it could be God, a guardian angel, a seperate ...

Gray skies, the rain in my face, rushing out of those halls. You brushed my cheek, gentle, to let the last raindrop fall. I broke away with the softness of ...

Excellent stuff, I'm pretty impressed with the intelligence of it, there are no 'waster' lines, it's all one big description and I love it Nice job, the 'immigration' sounded forced ...

I really hope you finish this because so far this sounds pretty amazing Right now I really want you to explain this part: I always knew I was different. Unique ...

Hello Mr EliteHusky I'm glad you enjoyed my mention the the word 'bed-sheet', it's actually quite under-appreciated and I'm very sad to hear that no one else uses it. I'm ...

Hair that sweeps ever so gently across my neck, sweetest ecstasy… I absolutely adore this line simple because of the great imagery that I got from this Overall I liked ...

Common cut us some slack here... It's hard to post beats, music etc. Music is meant to be heard I get what you're saying though, it's always difficult to read ...

I'd have issues with the repitition if it were a poem Yeah these are lyrics So it's not an actual poem, thus repetition is meant to fit in with the ...

Enter night-time, a perfect shadow A perfect bed sheet, this perfect nightfall The glowing streetlights Like a nightlight The glowing shepherd, the glowing shepherd Across this valley, footprints I he