ScarletDreams14

Tun remarked as a group of young girls passed by them. One of them gave him an appraising look, and it took all of Tun's self-control not to return it ...

I'm not much for hero's either. I love a good bad-guy. Keep writing!

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Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Yeah, yeah I know. Review day is over but I just can't help myself! Beautiful! This just about brought me to the brink of ...

I hope you didn't take this to offence, I just found this hard to read and it bothered me without the certain touch of punctuation and grammar. I understand It's ...

There's not suppose to be punctuation or capitalization in poetry? That disturbs me just a bit. Sorry, I disturbed you.

I see, I'll work on that! Thank you!

Thanks so much for the review! You have me some pretty helpful advice and I will defiantly take it into consideration.

Awesome! Oh and sorry about that, I tend to make my mistakes but I try not too. I'd love to be your beta! Anything to help a friend and I ...

Ah, I see and Lol. I'm trying! Great chapter though, I'm working on chapter 2 right now.

Thanks! I'm on team Aqua as well ;D

I suppose It is, but my point is basically peoples choice to act that way is absolutely wrong. That's only my opinion but I don't approve on how people judge ...

I like the way you think! I shall do that! (At some point)

Why, thank you! It's a work in progress but It's also only my statement on the human race. Not everyone would agree with it.

Thanks Aley! I don't find this offensive at all and find this rather helpful. I understand your argument and also thanks for pointing out that misconception with to. Everyone may ...

Ah, no it wasn't clear at the time. Ignore that comment in the review than lol.