Scarlet15

Thanks SO much for the critique. :) Hopefully it will help me in my other pieces. :)

I liked the whole mysterious aspect of this piece. I really liked it! :D

Ok!! Thanks for being my friend! :} What are the chats? o.o

I'm sorry but.. I actually figured out the site so.. I know more about it.. :/ Would you be sad/mad if I don't join? :C

Thanks!!! :D Where is the chat room? o.o

Haha, hi there, Julia! Truth be told, I'm quite shy myself. Or. Rather. Socially awkward and antisocial... but that's not the point. Nice to sort of meet you and such! ...

As I got my schedule, I decided to compare it with Rainee's. I had EVERY class with her! Oh great. How am I going to survive here? As I entered ...

OMG!!! You are truly talented! :D I didn't find anything wrong with this piece and I can't wait to read more!! ^-^

I love how it's written in "poem form". It's very interesting and it explains a lot. I didn't find any mistakes but overall I thought it was really good. :3

Overall, this is a GREAT start to a story. Everything about is amazing. I don't find any mistakes and.. It's a very interesting start. Can't wait to read more. :)

This little piece is really good. I don't see anything wrong with it. x)

Thanks!!! :D I will think about joining. x3 I like to write and read fantasy, realistic fiction, fiction and.. Romance. :}

No offense but.. I'm really young and I'm not ready yet to become friends with older people... -.-

I didn't read the whole story but I must say your work is absolutely amazing! :D I didn't find anything wrong with it. :3 Keep up with the good work! ...

Hey everyone!!!! x3 I'm looking for more friends and I was wondering.. anyone want to be my friend? o.o I can let you know about me if you'd like. :) ...