Savanah

The first time you said pounds I was like, twenty ponds of what? Then I realised it was money! Lol. Anyways. I hate this kind of story but the fact ...

I thought it was well written and enjoyed reading it, even if theres not much going on yet. :P Anyways, you write so that its easy to know what the ...

I defenitly had fun reading it! I liked how you handled so many characters at once. I can't do that, I always forget what my characters names are, how importaant ...

(I'm not the best at constructive comments so bear with me.) You seem to be like me, the only poems i can right are about someone getting murdured, maybe thats ...