Savanah

Fire, everywhere, blue shapes flying in the distance, a voice telling her to find the blessed mountain. She woke up, breathing hard, wondering where she was. Then she remembered. She ...

The first time you said pounds I was like, twenty ponds of what? Then I realised it was money! Lol. Anyways. I hate this kind of story but the fact ...

I thought it was well written and enjoyed reading it, even if theres not much going on yet. :P Anyways, you write so that its easy to know what the ...

Nah, its ok. But you understand everything in the next chapter. I'm sorry if it wasn't clear enough...maybe if I put the third chapter things will become clearer.

I defenitly had fun reading it! I liked how you handled so many characters at once. I can't do that, I always forget what my characters names are, how importaant ...

A nanowrimo novel. :D Please consider he fact that I wrote this super fast and I didn't review it yet. Zephyr was always bored in school. Now she was in ...

(I'm not the best at constructive comments so bear with me.) You seem to be like me, the only poems i can right are about someone getting murdured, maybe thats ...

That was defenitly quite dramatic. They're lyrics right? It would be cool if you could put lyrics to it. I didn't undertand what you meant by Don't you want to ...