Satira

I would like a review on . I only received one review for it, and would like some more criticism/input. Thank you in advance!

I think it's great if your characters are so strong that they seem to act independent of you. Less work for you! And if your guy thinks his name should ...

I mean, it sounds kind of like the twilight thing- Edward is like, 500 years old. Which is creepy. Since your older character looks young, it LOOKS acceptable... so I ...

please read this... I need it to get out of the free room before other works swamp it.

Jayden sat at his desk, a rustic and mahogany painted block. Peering outside of the window, he breathed with the pitter-patter of heavy rains. He sighed a deep sigh, leaning ...

awe, thank you fro mentioning me, i'm touched!

I like to write fantasy mostly because I don't have enough experience to write about the real world, so I make up my own rules in a world I created. ...

hi! i'm not really an expert in this, but it sounds like a great story, so i'm going to add my input. to answer the first question... it depends. going ...