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Sathalha

Sathalha

  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Bullets

    Well, this was a nice story with an important moral! Review time! Pros: The comparison of the shooters and the doctors interests me. One pair are life-takers, and the other ...

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Goodbye (depressing)

    Wow..... I just have to say, this is deeply touching. It's always hard to critique works like this, when the actual writing is so interconnected with the author themselves that ...

    Mar 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: And They Came For Us

    I'm here for a review that I'll try to make as good as possible! So, I really like the story of the guy stuck in the asylum who doesn't think ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: October Autumn: Daughter of the Dawn: Treaties of Love and Peace Part 1

    Um, just gonna do a review on this since I've done one on the other chapters. I'm really starting to love this book y'know? So many amazing things happening. So, ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: October Autumn: Daughter of the Dawn: Crises in Color part 1

    Hey there, I hope that I can make an informative and accurate review for you! Before I start with the questions, as a general overview this story is extremely fascinating. ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: October Autumn: Daughter of the Dawn: Chapter 12 part one

    Hi, I'll try to help as well as possible with the review! First of all, it's a really nice chapter that'd work well within a whole book. I quite like ...

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: A Secret Worth Keeping [RC:R1]

    First off, Hooray for a great Romcom short! Creating characters around our age is always a surefire way to go, as most people on this site can relate to them, ...

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Mr. Adkins [RC: R1]

    Beautiful. What a refreshing story to read when you're stuck between writing and studying for exams. Slice of life stories are the most relaxing type of genre in my opinion, ...

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: A National and Family War: A Civil War Story

    Aha, the American Civil war is the topic here I see. 1861-1865, an extremely bloody period for the whole of the United states at the time. Quite an interesting piece ...

    Mar 11, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Blessed

    Apocalypse dramas are always quite fun to play around with, whether they're zombie flicks or ohmygoditsanuclearstrike :D. Definetely a great introduction to what could be a longer novel, being able ...

    Mar 11, 2017


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