Sassykat

I just left the page and then came back so I could look at it again. It's so cool.

Wow! So much better! I was staring for a good thirty works. Wow. Amazing. I keep going back up to stare at it some more...

This is so beautiful!

It's supposed to be that way: Focal blur or something like that. The smile is clear, but everything else is hazy.

Edited!

This was amazing! It was so well thought out, I really don't have much to say to it. One thing I noticed, and it may be that I just read ...

The only thing I didn't like about it were the eyes. Very unique, very cool. I liked the water look of it!

There is a song in this girl, A song filled with music. I really liked how you made this line: how something may have/be a song, but not necessarily be ...

Oh , A ngel of F ate I do not believe No comma That the fate you have chosen is the fate for me , For I make my own ...

An amusement ride, I presume? How true, how very, very true. I enjoyed it. I just have a few critiques to make: As we accend, riders silence and raise their ...

I just have to say that I absolutely loved this. It was a little shaky at the beginning, and there was a problem with being repetitive throughout the whole thing ...

Supersad face!!

So I went to Girl's Camp this week and the deer did not seem to be afraid at all. I was able to get real close and take some nice ...

The first thing I noticed, grammar-wise, is that you have missed a couple of punctuation marks. Like here: I wonder sometimes if things were different if I’d still be wrapped ...

Story background: I was IMing my friend the other day, and she told me to write a really random story. I was thinking about this poem at the time, and ...