Sassykat

Wow. I will never see this poem the same way again! That was different. In a morbid, depressing way...which is not a bad thing! If you look at my poetry ...

Again, I don't like this; I can't relate to it at all. I have both my parents. Mommy? Are you feeling better now? Aw, don't cry, mommy. It's only a ...

No. Sorry? No. What do you mean, no? Just that, no. I'm sorry, that's not acceptable. Really? I'm not. I deserve and apology for this treatment. Make me lie, then. ...

I can only agree with Blue. It was beautiful, and romantic...that was what you meant, right? There's something else good about it, it's not a message-giver so much as a ...

I almost didn't finish this one, It's going to give me nightmares! In the second stanza (doing my best to comb through this without being too scared) I think Murmuring ...

I thought that this was fun and lighthearted. I enjoyed it. "Laughter bounces off the walls as many merry people meet to do what we all love. Perform." Okay, first ...

I enjoyed this one, though there is room for improvement. I feel like a hypocrite for saying this, because I used to do the same thing, but I have to ...

I am afraid I can't agree, Panda, that phrase is a question. I do have to point out something similar, though, when you said "did you laugh? Did you laugh." ...

I really liked this one. I think it is easy to relate to...or at least for my mom or someone. I think everyone who has waited in line at a ...

I am thinking, and this is just my opinion, that you could maybe make the title more clear? The title is "Only One Shed", and I was thinking of something ...

I honestly don't like this this one, I wasn't even depressed when I wrote it. -- I sit by her bed, I hold her hand, I cry, I pray. Don't ...

Tentative color, Almost flamboyant--not quite-- Bright shadow of green. ~~ The Sun sighs deeply, Warming the Earth's grateful face To a pink-hued blush. ~~ The blush deepens now, Ostentatious colors ...

Yes, it was depressing, yes it was violent. But I enjoyed it. I thought that the shortness of it was nice, making it simple and quick to read. and yet.... ...

I thought this was very interesting. It was a little vague, but perhaps this only adds to the, maybe, woozy sensation of a girl who just had her heart broken? ...

I thought this one was kind of interesting, the way you used a rhythm, but never rhymed. I thought it was beautiful, and I loved it. I think you could ...