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Re: To Be Poetically Impaired is an Art
April 8, 2011 My thoughts are in Dutch, My vision seems very blurred; I swear, I'm not drunk. I stayed up until four-- I'm talking about a.m. The book was ...
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Re: My Eternity
Release your pride Fall through the skies And weightless be Your eternity Your fear shall die And you will cry "Now freedom be My eternity"
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Re: Procrastinatorism
Rushing as fast as I can... But will I be on time? Will my grade end up in the can, Or will I make it and be fine? I worked ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: To Be Poetically Impaired is an Art
April 7, 2011 Rushing as fast as I can.. But will I be on time? Will my grade end up in the can, Or will I make it and shine? ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: To Be Poetically Impaired is an Art
April 6, 2011 Release your pride Fall through the skies And weightless be Your eternity Your fear shall die And you will cry "Now freedom be My eternity"
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: I'll Be There
You've lost everything, You only want to flee. Calm down, and be assured; You will never lose me. When things tumble down around, Just keep your eyes on mine. I'll ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Poetically Impaired
Being poetically impaired is an art, But one such that makes me feel smart! I try my best With unmatched zest To write each one of these from the heart. ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: To Be Poetically Impaired is an Art
April 5, 2011 (In case you can't tell, I am trying to make my work more positive.) You've lost everything, You only want to flee. Calm down, and be assured, ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: To Be Poetically Impaired is an Art
April 4, 2011 Being poetically impaired is an art, But one such that makes me feel smart! I try my best With unmatched zest To write each one of these ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Hard Love
This had an interesting feel to it, like she's heartbroken but she saw it coming so isn't surprised. She's accepted that he's gone. ♥d it. Did you intend it to ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Music wins this war
Okay I can already tell I will like this because (and now I quote my life's theme: ) English is only my second language. Music is my first. I have ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Just Another Boy Meets Girl
This was an interesting poem. I like it. I would think to tidy up the rhythm, it's affecting the flow a little bit. But intern filled my heart with sadness, ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Confused
I like this one. I actually wrote this because of some feelings I wasn't able to express in any other way than this. This is my story right now. Today, ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Love Lasts
Wow! I like this a lot. You know, this was the second hospitalized story I've read today, and this one was a lot more depressing. LOL I like it! Breathing ...
Apr 4, 2011 -
Re: Colorful
Wow that was powerful. There were some clarity issues, like I didn't know for quite a while exactly why this person had to go into surgery. All of them looked ...
Apr 3, 2011
