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Re: Still and Forever
And the eagles still cry And fly so high; And the lovebirds still sing As they together take wing; And the jaybirds still fight, But just out of sight. And ...
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Re: To Be Poetically Impaired is an Art
April 12, 2011 And the eagles still cry And fly so high; And the lovebirds still sing As they together take wing; And the jaybirds still fight, But just out ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: To Be Poetically Impaired is an Art
okay, I disappeared on a stupid camping trip last week so I couln't really write. I tried, then I lost my notebook. Here are two, though: April 11, 2011 One ...
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Re: standing tall
animepup, you did miss a couple of things. Let me point them out: The b lood that drips from my veins Is nothing but cold and bitter pain I guess ...
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Re: I'll Choose To Believe
" co-incidence" I'm pretty sure this doesn't need a hyphen. "and then wonder if I'm wrong or if I'm right" This line combined with the one above it looks like ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: One of those days
I liked this. I agree with Amelia, though, you could use a different phrase as your theme. "One of those days..." I expected a depressing thing full of problems and ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Night songstress
This is sweet. I like the simpleness of it, and how it just is . Sometimes I like a poem without deep, philosophical meaning to it, something that I can ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: To Be Poetically Impaired is an Art
April 10, 2011 I don't want to go camping. There's mosquitoes and bees, And flies and fleas, Fungi and disease! So please, please, please Don't make me go camping.
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: BreAkinG heArT
Do you know how it hurts To see your friend Say s*** behind your back Being mean to you Totally ignoring you Like if you didn’t exist? If this former ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: My First Date
I've known him for years. He's one of my closest friends, but not yet to the point of he being my brother. I think. People sometimes think that, and I ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Fragile
Oh, wow, this was sweet. I really liked it. I loved your china doll metaphor, and how you kept flashing back to the china dolls on the shelf, then back ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Oh straws.
I'm not new here. I don't even remember when I joined. I just never actually posted here. Oh, well, here I go now. In case you couldn't tell by my ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
We like new people here! We LOVE you so much! Have a great time here, we peeps who have been here a while will do our very best to help ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Leather
This is a type of poem I've never seen before...something that's becoming a more common occurrence for me. I liked the way this was set up. I just have to ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Sleep-Deprived
My thoughts are in Dutch, My vision seems very blurred; I swear, I'm not drunk. I stayed up until four-- I'm talking about a.m. The book was so good! And ...
Apr 8, 2011
