Sassykat

Awesome. I heard about that guy, and I wonder what happened to his reputation when he was wrong not once, but twice ...Anyway, loved it! I sit silently watching the ...

Short, sweet, and amazing. I liked it. One critique, and it's that the word "encase" means, I believe, to put something inside a case. What you are looking for here ...

Liked it! There was a lot of...ooh, what's the word?.. haughtiness , or maybe aloofness in there, or maybe even quite a bit of I told you so. Plenty of ...

Whhoooooaaaahhhh. I can totally feel your frustration. This was incredibly creative! I loved it! I think viscous is an unbelievably perfect word for it. Heehee. I think the only critique-y ...

I liked this, it was awesome. It had meaning to it. I think the rhyme in the first stanza (night/alright) was slightly forced, or even cliche, but other than that ...

yes, I believe this was as cliche as you feared, but you pulled it off! It was sweet! I can only say you can clean it up just a little ...

I like this one. Short and simple. It could go a little deeper, adding a little more meaning, but personally I like it just the way it is. Fantastic.

Oh, this was so beautiful! I really liked it! I don't know sonnet structure, so I dare not attempt critique-y-ness, but I just have to say that I loved it. ...

Ummm....okay. Not sure I understood the purpose of this. Ranting? I'm sure this makes sense to someone.

The voice of this piece was clear. I liked it. I couldn't understand parts of it, though, and you need to work on clarification. Is the person you are talking ...

I think it's so sweet that your dad asked you to do this. I can tell you wrote this in a hurry, but it has definite potential to become moving ...

Liked it. Shorter, but got the meaning across very, very well. This poem portrays a very unique emotion; a "you've done something bad to me, but I will forgive you ...

Well...words! Those were words! I like those words. :D They were pretty words... Palindromic". I like it.

I asked you a question afterwords, It's spelled 'afterwards'. This was sweet. I think it would fit better in lyric poetry, but I think it's okay. I can totally relate ...

Okay. This has potential. I can see the powerful message in this, it's just not blooming to what it could be quite yet. The flow seemed off in several places ...