Sassykat

How sweet. Now, critiques! I would tell you today, here I added a backspace before the comma and a return T hat you're the one that fills my life, same ...

Critiques first: I've got stresses up to here, Constant whispers in my ear Keep my grades high, keep tension low, With nowhere to turn but places to go. Smile, frown, ...

*gasp1!!!11* savvy, I know just how you feel. I almost started crying, too.OH this was sweet!!! Why, oh, why can't I like something more than once? Oh, well, I'll just ...

Aww, how sweet. I'm thinking, since you did use some punctuation, that you might add the right capitalization. Also, there were some spots that seemed a little unclear: as i ...

Woe is me, for I cannot love him more, Lest my heart burst with such intensity. The fire of passion burns within my core, To weep with longing my propensity. ...

Was that it? I think the reason there is nothing to critique is because there is almost nothing there to begin with. You have a good start, here, but it ...

Oaaaaawwweeeehalallallentalwla325a 3523j;51iuawefj This was amazing-sauce!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I must admit, it was like an amazing book I couldn't put down. Ever word was suspensful, except for the last one

Soccer, right? Oh, this was excellent. You definitely caught the mood of the moment very well, I could see and feel everything well. Great job. I can't think of anything ...

This was nice. It had meaning to it: you took what would normally be a cliche and made it new and fresh, and beautiful! Just one thing, I think that ...

Ooooh, this was so an amazingly good way! I loved it! If I we were allowed to push the "like" button more than once, I would push it about seven ...

This was pretty. One like from me! I just noticed, critique-wise, that you had a tendency to throw in an extra syllable (or three) here and there, and it really ...

"Put four of clubs on the five of diamonds..." I muttered to myself. This was looking good. Could I win this time? I'd been told that Solitaire is difficult, and ...

Okay. I can see this being great. Just a few critiques: You need to work on your punctuation. Add commas, or even periods in some places. "Bare" in the fifth ...

GASP! *faints* This was so cool. Please tell me you're going to do this with "Jar of Hearts." Fantastic job, totally loved it!

Ooooh. I loved it. It really got across the message well. Sweet job.