Sassykat

Gyaaah! Why am I crying! This was so amazing! Yes, It was cliche, yes it was predictable, and yes it was....fantastic. You did an amazing job. Just one question: If ...

Short, sweet, and to the point: I couldn't ask for more for a poem like this. You got the idea across fantastically. *clicks like* Great job!

Oh this was fun. It was, regardless of the last two lines, a very confident poem. I actually feel the exact same way right now. In real life. It's a ...

How nice. I twas very refreshing, kind of a nice poem to read. I couldn't find any other nitpicks, so I'll just tell you what a wonderful job you did. ...

I liked this. It was very sweet. I couldn't find anything to nitpick, so I'll just say well done!

DramaLlama got most of the nitpicks I would have normally put, so I will just give the one other I found: He was a wonderful gentleman I had loved, until ...

This seemed to jump around in topics, to the point of not making least to me. At the end of the first stanza, I'm not sure what's with the colon, ...

“I don’t know . M aybe. I’m not getting my hopes up about anything. Most guys are douchers, why should I expect he’s anything different?” “I need a refill,” she ...

Sweet ness . Awesome. All I have to say is that you should capitalize the beginning of every line, not just the beginning of sentences. As for titles, here are ...

Yaaaah! I cannot stress more that you neeeeeeed to indeeeeeent. Since, though, that qaralynn already covered that, I'll do some more specific nitpicks. Not today, not tomorrow, but in the ...

Another great one! All I have to say is CaPiTaLiZe. And if you're going to use the dot dot dot sequence, use three dots instead of two or else it ...

Wow, you're good at this. I think I'll follow you now....*clicks follow.* Critiquing! If you looked inside a girl you would see how much she really cries, You would find ...

an d I become the (pssst...there's only one center to the world) center of this world A maz ing job. Very excellent. You caught the emotion impeccably. My only critiques ...

gasp! Awesome description! Oh, wow....now I just have to ask what this has to do with May. Unless you wrote it in May...I honestly couldln't see any relation to May ...

Ooooh, graphic. Excellent description. I would say use capitalization. Lots of it. Call me a stickler, but I loooove capitalization. Bear, right?