Sassykat

What do you mean? It's beautiful! Well, it's not the most cheerful, but it's definitely not depressing. It's hopeful and realistic. Just wondering,though, if you intended to put the apostrophe ...

Fall with me beyond the grasp of Angels a nd Demons. Very pretty. Well worded, well phrased, well done. I loved it! I wonder if "Blue Night" is a better ...

Niiice. Great imagery, though parts of it didn't make a ton of sense. Maybe that's just me not trying very hard right now :-D . Can I just say well ...

Deeeepressing. All I can say is that since you have in the case of punctuation it's all or nothing, at least in my opinion. This can be taken care of ...

For the Song Prompt contest. I was given the song Jar of Hearts by Christina Perri. I thought I'd change it around though, and make it not from the view ...

For DramaLlama's "Word is Stronger than a Thousand Pictures" contest. She gave me the word twin, and I though of my sisters. They are six-year-old twins. I see them every ...

Aw! A proposal? How sweet! I enjoyed this one. Just one nitpick, though: It’s tough, now -a- days, to show or even let you know

This was definitely different. This is one of those stories so profound, with so many deep layers of meaning, that I will probably remember it for a long, long time. ...

I liked it a lot. I couldn't find anything to edit, since you've pointed out already the only flaw. Here are some title suggestions: Dream Ship Hopeful Dawn Dawn Night ...

*shivers* You dreamed this? What kind of books do you read right before you sleep? I didn't see anything to critique, so I'll just let you know that I want ...

When you only saw one set of footprints, it was then that I carried you. For that Christian Writing contest with the above theme! And this is all true, by ...

In response to CuteJack, I think this was a poem about one of many younger children whose mother just died (that's what's making them "sore" memories). That's the thing I ...

I only saw one thing that I was confused about for the longest time. I think it's just me, because I get confused about this a lot, but it goes ...

Just a few nitpicks: Turning around, my "friend" Georgie slung her arm around my neck and squ ee zed me as hard as possible. I think this was just a ...

I just have a couple things to say about this talent- and tasteful piece. Just that you really should use capitalization if you are going to use punctuation (but that's ...