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Re: When Night Falls
~This is my first story ever posted on this site. I'm so excited I can hardly think straight! Please, be harsh. I plan on turning this into a novel and ...
Jul 31, 2010 -
Re: Paranoia And Me
Hello, Loveless. Reise here to review your entry. This was a nice read, in my limited time being here, I haven't seen many post like this on Yws. I've never ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
7/10 That's so cute! Kitty cat go rawr ! Heh.
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Intrigue
Hello, Razzle. Reise here to review. I love how you have the hidden message inside of your poem. That was really creative and when I actually found it, it made ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
I'm back! *strikes a Peter Pan pose* Okay, I see that you added a new piece! I really like it, those simple four stanzas added a lot to your story. ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Heir
Name: Lilth Brooks Age: 19 Gender: Male Animal: Owl Appearance - Written: Layered black hair with various streaks of white. He has long fingers with sharp nails and silver/blue eyes. ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Heir
Okay. I claim Owl. I'll post my profile soon.
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Heir
Can I have the Owl?
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Untitled
Hello, Writer. I need you to here , I need you to see , so wont you listen dear , when you come home to me. I read this piece ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Juliet diary entry (Romeo and Juliet)
Hello, Waterlily. This was well written, though at times I could not understand a single thing Juliet was saying. There are, however, too many "O Romeo" bits in this entry. ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: This Is How I Say Goodbye....
Hello, Sakura. I'll be reviewing this for you today. :) I was one of the most against suicide people you could meet. This sounds awkward. Instead of saying "most against ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Bikes and Books - Chapter One
Hello, NYC. I'll be your reviewer today. Stand ing up and putting some money on the table, she looked around the cafe, as if it hurt to say goodbye. There ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: on a beach
Hello, Creative. No life surrounding us to make a sound, just the waves, in, and out , carrying my thoughts to the depths of the sea. Above us , the ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Summer Photography - 1
Hello, Lava. 1. This picture is my favorite one. This is really good considering you took it with your camera phone! The only thing bad about it were the tire ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Heart of Stone<3
Hello, Anne! I'll try my best to give you a proper review! Everything I say will be in green. As I stared at the glossy picture it felt as if ...
Jul 30, 2010