Sassafras

Hello! This was so cute and funny. Dreaming of the day when you'll wake up and find that, Princess Leia, will want to smack your behind. This made me choke ...

10/10 I mean, come on, its McFly!

Hello, Inspired. I'll be your reviewer today. The moon was full, and bright as ever. You don't need the comma. i could hear the gentle hum of his breathing. Capitalize ...

Lilth I continued on with my drawing, listening to the man on the microphone halfheartedly. The only part of the speach that peaked my interest was the part about groups. ...

Will we all just be in the same group?

Name: Jet Age: 21 Gender: Male Son/Daughter of: Ares Appearance: Gelled up brown hair and dark chocolate brown eyes. He has two scars on his left cheek from a fight. ...

Lilth~ The noise all around me was nearly unbearable. Must people always be so hectic and unruly? There were people in little groups scuttling around and talking loudly, obviously not ...

Heelo, Durrie! He found the man to be ‘Blue’, called that because of his red hair. Oxymoron, gotta love it. This story was very nice and even a bit sad. ...

When are we staring this?

Hello, Sierra. He just wished he could have made it another month, to turn seventeen. This is really sad. She grasped one of her his cold hands in her own ...

Banned for having an animated avvie.

Hello, Mermeid. Reise again. I'd no idea that English was not your first language. That sure explain a lot ! Heh. Okay, I completely understand now. You writing this would ...

Hello, Ducky. 1. I love all the colors in this photo. It fire hydrant in the middle of all those flowers is just beautiful. Everything just fits together and looks ...

Can you review my story When Night Falls ? It's in General Fiction Novels thread.

Hello, Mermeid! Reise here for a review. Okay, first of all, the title bothers me. Just capitalize the 'M' in "mrs" and put a period behind the 'S'. You also ...