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Re: Runaway Marriage - chapter 1 pt. 1
Hello, Ofir. This was really well written! I love the plot of this story. At first, I though Becky and Matt were going to be together and then, out of ...
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Re: Scars
Hello, Inspired. This is really well written and even though the flow and rhythm is a bit choppy, it was still really nice to read. There was a lot of ...
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Re: Title Feedback
It makes me think of the main character going through everyday life with those little petty problems that keep popping up. It also could be a romance novel about a ...
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Re: Forget Me Not
Hello, Ragtime! I love the quote at the beginning of your story, as you can see, I'm a big Peter Pan fan myself. Even though this was short, it was ...
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Re: How to Modify Your Blog
Hello, Snoink! A million thanks to you for posting this, I was thinking of starting a regular blog since I'd already posted something. Making it pretty is just a bonus. ...
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Re: A random sword...
Hello, Isha! This is very well drawn, I really like the handle. The decorations are really pretty. Your lines are very straight and crisp, the only suggestion I have would ...
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Re: Renegade Children-Cloud and Keke
Hello, Quest. When reading this, I feel as if I've walked in on the middle of a Novel or something. This was good, don't get me wrong, but there was ...
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Re: My Falling Sun Ch. 1 (remade)
Hello, Princess. Just a few nitpicks before I get on with my commentary. “It is way to early to o be up,” Ethan grumbled, handing his father the bright green ...
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Re: Sun's Warmth
Hello, Cakes. These were so beautiful! Your photography skills are just super. I love how clear everything is. The one of the clouds was really nice. The first one may ...
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Re: This is disgusting (KFC)
I blame fast food companies for obesity in the United States. What were the people of KFC thinking? As if it isn't already a problem trying to keep people's weight ...
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Re: Ban The User Above You! [5]
Banned for trying to fool the YWS nation with your clever signature.
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Re: *EDIT* Slim Chance
Hello, Rawr. I agree with both Lauren and Lena. This could be a very interesting story if you would just get a likely unlikely way she could get pregnant. Man, ...
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Re: Fate of the World
When is this starting?
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Re: My mother
Hello, Kosal. Kudos on posting this. Finially, someone is giving a shout out to hard working moms everywhere. This is well written save for a few minor mistakes, but the ...
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Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but you can only fly and arent allowed to touch land again. You live a long and lonely life up in the sky with only birds to talk to. ...
Aug 1, 2010
