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Banned for banning Pundit!

Name: Atana "Tani" Age: 18 Gender: Female. Appearance: Messy red hair, big, round, chocolate brown eyes, and a thin build. Occupation: She's an orphan. Skills: Being that she lives in ...

Hello, Itisume! After I'm done with my little nitpicks, I'll go on to tell you what I thought. So, let's get started. Who would’ve known that any events to take ...

Transylvania by McFly. I read the comment Ranger put on my profile that got me thinking of this song.

Hello, Reader! I like the second better. In the first, the clouds just seems like too much. You also got less of the houses and more of the sky in ...

Hello, Cyn! Well, you did forget to capitalize the letter 'I', but Reader caught that already. You got your point across, but this is lacking description and that little sprinkle ...

Hello, Tamtam. I don't know how to really review songs but I'll try my best. First of all, this was really good, but I wish I had something to compare ...

Hey, Photo! This looks like something that would be at Hot Topic! I would so buy this, it just looks so cool. I agree with Anger about the back not ...

Granted, but now knowing what you want to wish for, you can't make the wish because you wasted your wish on wishing you knew want to wish for. :) I ...

Hello, Sierra. Background stuff you may want to know: *Cerian is the MC's arch nemesis *Araminta is the MC's twin sister. *The MC is not so good at swordplay. This ...

Lilth: "Where else is there to hide a kidnapped prince and his father's murderer?" He was right of course. I sighed and pulled out my drawing pad again, what else ...

Hello, Persephoneia. The movement of her arm seemed almost disjointed as she switched the car into reverse and threw it back without heed, crashing into the neighbor’s overly pruned hedges.. ...

Slop.

Hello, Hiadel. I'm just going to get my little nitpicks out of the way before I state my thoughts on this. Five million dollars had just flown from the hands ...

I think the review checklist is really helpful. It help me to make sure I write down everything that will improve the author's writing. And if I don't have everything ...