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Re: Happily Ever Never? Starting!
Sorry guys, that's the best title I could come up with. Okay, this is mostly me trying to get further inspiration for a novel I'm working on. The main plot ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: Midday Meditation
Hello, VioletJune. I really like how the sun is hitting Juli's face and the way she stands out against the background of trees. You could include more of what she ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: Fate of the World
Vorez After dropping Fluffy off at his sitters house - Yes I have a sitter for my rabbit. Is that a problem? - I started off in the direction this ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: The Young Gods ** Started/ Not Accepting**
Jet I stepped out of the water and walked back to my small hut. The food was done and the skins were dry. All thats left to do now is ...
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: A World of Chances (Started)
Name: Clarissa Laden Nickname: Rissa. Riss. Clari. Age: 21 Gender: Female Languages: English. French. Spanish. Japanese. College: A&M Picture: Written description: (height, weight, build, ect.) She's
Aug 8, 2010 -
Re: Bikes and Books - Chapter Two
Hello again, Nightowl. Thanks for the PM. "Mason!" Georgia, my five year-old sister, (action here) latching on to my leg and looked up at me. I grinned, despite the fact ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Heir
Lilth The Arynss took off and I slowly followed behind, too tired to even fly anymore. I was just about to break through the ring of trees leading to camp ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: The Young Gods ** Started/ Not Accepting**
Jet I stared in confusion and amazement as the strange woman ran away. I growled at the wolves before lowering my swords to my side and walking away. A few ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Fight for Control
Name: Ridic Valcon Age: Who's counting anyway? Gender: Male Side: Dark Element: Earth Appearance: He has shaggy dark brown hair and brown eyes. He's not skinny but he's not really ...
Aug 6, 2010 -
Re: Play. Pause. Rewind.
Hello, Anger. You were right, this does have a lot of reviews, but I will review anyway! Her lips were changing colour and her eyes were listless, her hands were ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Fire Dimensions-Prologue
Muahaha! Hello, Ishh. Tonight was the night that every Fatua in the kingdom met, sang out for all of Lasverna to hear. That comma would be best replaced with the ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: In the Pursuit of Happiness
Hello, Lena! “Fuckin’ A! What the fuck is wrong with you!” I understand you want to emphasize his screaming, but the proper puncuation mark behind the second sentence needs a ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: A random sword...
Something about that just sounds...wrong. *laughs nervously*
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: The Lost Heir
Lilth I crashed through the trees leading back to the campsite. But, before I could even settle, another owl was flying around me in circles. Sighing, I followed suit when ...
Aug 5, 2010 -
Re: Let The Hell Begin
Hello, Emm. Emerge and fright. This really doesn't make much sense. They'll pick the life,right off your bone. Bone should be plural. Demons rise up,from the ground.The hell hounds make,unholy ...
Aug 4, 2010
