Sarah24

Hey! Cool story. Though I feel it would have been better if there was more description. I didn't understand when Carter sang "Good luck to me," I mean it was ...

Hey! Cool story. Though I feel it would have been better if there was more description. I didn't understand when Carter sang "Good luck to me," I mean it was ...

Hey! So I liked the rhythm and the description was awesome. Instead of having 'and I held my breath' maybe just get rid of the and. I could see everything ...

Hey! So I liked the rhythm and the description was awesome. Instead of having 'and I held my breath' maybe just get rid of the and. I could see everything ...