SaraAnne

Here's a quick suggestion, please feel free to take it or leave it. Why don't you start the book with a prologue which is set in her childhood as the ...

This is really strong writing. Well done on creating such a believable world. I enjoyed reading this. Quick things: "...for fear of bringing her wraith on his head." This made ...

There are some awesome hints in the Writing Tips section which might help you out. There are also no doubt a lot of resources on the net whch could help. ...

This is top quality stuff. Its all very true.

You are a hero. Everyone should read this. :)

Woot - an excuse to talk about witch trials! You might need to narrow down your context if you are aiming for accuracy - if not, just roll with it. ...

In three words, go for it. You have nothing to loose. If your series peters out because you aren't able to sustain it, then you have lost nothing and gained ...

Hiya all, I have finished my novel (as in I have written "the end" not actually finished working on it). This is about the sixth draft and I am finally ...

Hi there, I just wanted to chime in because I have been having some issues with this myself. The questions listed in the post above are top notch. This is ...

Yeah I actually agree, I think there are certain questions which are quite essential for example but I am pretty sure you can get away with a fair few of ...

I thought this was very funny - and also quite useful. It is a list of questions you should ask of your fantasy novel/plot to determine the extent to which ...

The army’s camp was in the hills to the south of the now carrion-infested ground where the battle had taken place. I'm not sure if something can be "infested" with ...

Well no, I'm sorry it's not a ey original idea. The basic premise of a girl becoming a princess because someone dies, has been used over and over again. Wouldn't ...

Hello there! =) I imagine that this would make more sense when seen in the context of the rest of the story but i enjoyed it none the less. I ...

I read eragon because of Durza. He was fantastically hot. And now that Durza is gone, there is no joy in Eragon. Or in any of his strange creations. Although, ...