Sapphire

Firstly, I love the title! I think it is a very sweet and fitting metaphor. I do have a few suggestions: I put my trust out there every time, trusting ...

Hope you both have happy birthdays! :birthday: :smt113

Hey! I reviewed the earlier version of this but now I've read this again, I have a few more suggestions (in bold). Punctuation/typo changes are also in bold, but I ...

Welcome to the site, Faithe! That would be a pretty pen name. YWS is brilliant, so hopefully it will become your replacement site. :) Adna covered everything so I'll just ...

I loved it! Where on earth did you get the idea? :lol: My only suggestion: I don't know if it was intentional or not, but from the second line onward ...

I liked this! I only have a couple of suggestions that I think would improve the flow slightly, but they're really minor points. Shallow Muse - Love the title. My ...

Hi Scarlett! Welcome to YWS. Love is possibly the most written about topic so I think I agree with you that every poet has written something about it (even if ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS, Ankit! You might also be interested in for writers aged 18 and over, created by the same brilliant webmaster as YWS. I'm sure you'll find your ...

Welcome to the site, Gemma! I adore Phantom of the Opera! The book is currently on my 'to read' list - can't believe I haven't read it already but I'm ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! I really liked this. I've quoted it so I can make suggestions as to punctuation you could use, in an attempt to make myself feel useful. ...

Welcome to fun4eva, taleoflostink, xSection8 and LostInWonderland! Hope you're all getting on OK. If you need any help with the site, just ask for it. :)

i think its mainly because once i studied the ideas behind them they held so much more meaning. That's the same for me. If I found something difficult to understand ...

I'm one of these people who can never pick a favourite anything, poetry being no exception. It depends on the way I'm feeling and what's going on in my life ...

Hi! As always, there were examples of great imagery and language. However, I felt that there were a couple of awkward sections as well: A year with you, a sigh ...

I love this poem. It's so full of brilliant imagery and ideas that it's difficult to pick a favourite section, but I love: I carved my initials into its soul ...