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Don't worry, you only joined a few hours ago! But welcome! I'm still learning about the site myself so I can't help too much at the moment, but I see ...

I'm really grateful for these reviews. I'm going go away and work on it and try to iron out these issues. smorgishborg , I think I will try it in ...

Thanks everyone for the welcomes and information! LoveableLittleSock , I might actually do that, thanks. :)

I read the descriptions for each type of poetry but still wasn't too sure where to put this so settled on 'Other' - that has to be a safe bet. ...

I really liked this poem. The title made me, personally, want to read it so nice choice! I'm not going to pick out images because they were all beautiful but ...

Thank you for the welcome! I surely will PM you when I've posted something or if I need any help - the site's quite overwhelming! Going to have a look ...

Eek, I got such a shock with that last line! Loved how the last line turned it all around. I didn't think the rhymes were too forced except perhaps 'I ...

In the s u mmer when I go to bed , The sun still streaming overhead , - I think this line would be nice in parenthesis! My bed becomes ...

Like BlondeTwiggy said, it was nice in chronological order and as Sportgurl46 said most people can definitely relate to this subject. Just a couple of picky things: Unknowing the emotion ...

Hi everyone! I’m Lauren and you’ll have heard all this before, but I’m really glad to discover this site. It’s difficult to find people interested in critiquing your work and ...