Sapphire

Personally I never saw what was so horrible about cliches. YES - one should try to be original. And you can't always rely on cliches. But sometimes when I'm read ...

Personally I never saw what was so horrible about cliches. YES - one should try to be original. And you can't always rely on cliches. But sometimes when I'm read ...

"Eleanor Rigby" - David Cook ZOMG. Sex-ay. :shock: Nice! 'For Good' from the Wicked soundtrack. Love this song!

Well, you already have plenty of amazing critiques so I've not mentioned some points that stood out if they've already been covered, but probably will have repeated a few. Father ...

Well, I can relate to this! Not the hysteria-over-the-pencil part, but sisters doing what they can to annoy you! My comments are Demeter's. You seem to know yourself the sections ...

Happy birthday! Have a great day. :)

I love this. Wow, that was simple! :lol: I think one of the reasons I can't pick at this is because I really relate to it and I don't want ...

Although everyone's already assured you, I'm going to repeat the 'don't worry about age' point since I'm 19 too. :lol: I've looked at the Writer's Society but plan to stay ...

Hi all! Summer's almost over, but I'll still be critiquing. Throw those pieces my way! The following is some more information about what I can and can't critique. What I ...

Hi sday! I quite liked this. Points to consider: - Would the first semi-colon not be better as a colon? My reasoning for this was that it seems like the ...

Saphire, I'm afraid I don't critique poetry. Sorry. :( Oops, no problem! :)

I would really like more thoughts on this poem: Sinking I had trouble with it so that would really help me out. Thank you! :)

Hi, welcome to the site! I agree, 'geek' is a compliment. :lol:

Hi, welcome! I'm sure you'll get on fine, but if you have any questions about anything there's 'The Information Desk' forum and moderators names are in green, though most members ...

Welcome to the site! I'm Sapphire, as you can see, or Lauren, but you don't need to remember that. :lol: I'm also a David Tennant fan. :wink: I'll let you ...