Saphirra

I give this a thumbs up. This draws the reader in from the very beginning, and i love the way you make the narrator seem to be afraid of the ...

This was an interesting piece. I found myself worried about Deborah, but i find the end unrealistic. she wouldn't be able to stay on the land that her family had ...

This is my first piece of writing, please go easy on me :D Prologue (Juliana POV) I was sitting in my office, stopping work for a brief moment to look ...

I liked the way you delivered the story in concise sentences. it made it stronger and more impressing. Its interesting and attention grabbing. However, i agree that you could work ...

Hey! I really liked that. An idea kind of popped up when i saw all the people talking about emotion though. If the killer is crazy, or has autism that ...

Hey! So i guess people want to know a little about me, so here goes: 1. I am a bookworm/writer 2. i'm really random :) 3. I have written, but ...