Saphira

Katlyn ran behind Dargon and Lethero staring at the new arrivals. She had strapped the knife to her thigh using some cloth but she needed a new weapon. She looked ...

This is amazing! It is really well written and the flow is good. Apart from saying 'is' twice in the first stanza and the miss spelling of pretences it is ...

I thought this was really good. It flows well but gets confusing in places. I think that the last stanza isn't needed and if it ended on a question it ...

I think they are amazing! I have just started the first one but i have completed the second. I thought they were really good. Disney charaters rule! hehe :P

7/10! True but a bit depressing

6/10! I think that it is to busy and i can't see the picture very well.

WWUD if your main villain kidnapped your friends?

Katlyn dived to the ground to evade one of the flying knives. She quickly got to her feet and picked up one of the fallen knives. Spinning around she sliced ...

I like the armored guy. The shading is good but i think that it would look good with some colour. The second guy is cool and very creepy. I think ...

I really liked this, very original! I agree that the last stanza seems out of place because it contradicts with the rest of the poem. Apart from that it is ...

All the grammer and everything is really god but you need to add more puntuation. It flows well but adding puntuation will make it easier to understand and add more ...

8/10! I can't remember what i wrote before but i love your avatar and i think that the pearls are really elegant.

Katlyn looked at the scene that was unfolding before her eyes. Lethero and Dargon were both on the ground injured with guards around them and Aro was still being held ...

The colour is alittle off because i coloured it with pencil crayons.

Aww he is so cute! I love the ears and the mouth. He seems more surprised to me but he is still cool. The tree and mushrooms are really good!