Saphira

10/10 I love it! it is really bright and lively! :)

Critique-Chapter 1 The punctuation is good and is very effective in the dialogue. I could find very little wrong with this as it was written well. I don't normally like ...

Granted! But every one else is afraid of you! I wish that i could get some inspirarion for my book

I like this cover. I think the dragon is fantastic and really stands out. The only thing i would change is the positioning of the titles and book 1 because ...

The poem was good. Some of the line breaks are unnecessary and just distract the reader from the meaning of the poem. The describtion is good but could still be ...

4/10! I am realy pleased! (also shocked and surprised!) I didn't know most of them so i am glad i got 4! :D

My first story was about a boy called charlie who couldn't get into school because his school had got covered in candyfloss by large purple aliens. Lukily my stories have ...

Hi Kizzi! :D Welcome to the site. If you have any questions don't hesitate to pm me :D I jump genres to but i mainly write fantasy. Just write what ...

I can't spell to save myself! I am a really bad speller! I read a lot and it doesn't help so i agree with Claudette. I don't like my englsh ...

I'm just keeping my fingers crossed, because while the sixth book was good, I didn't think it was the level of good I expect from the Harry Potter series. I ...

I loved it! each charater is well developed and has a depth that gets the readers hooked. I like that you introduced more than 1 main character. Another thing i ...

Granted! but now it snows everyday till the world turns into a giant snow ball that gets thrown at the sun by aliens! i wish that summer was here so ...

wow! awsome! i really like the book cover it looks really good. in the icons rows 1 and 2 are my favourates

'Do you have any tranquillizers?' what would you do if you found yourself in the middle of an argument between a troll and a leprechaun

Granted! but now everyone else is late so you are always left waiting for hours! I wish that i could type faster!