Saphira

I think this is really good. I like her expression. You need to work on the hair though, it doesn't seem to blend well with her face. I love the ...

I really like this. I love the detail on the pants, shoes and jacket. I also like the hair and face thought it seems at an odd angle to me. ...

I really like 'My sister's keeper'. I thought it was absolutly amazing but that is the only book of hers that i like. All the others seem flat and really ...

I am reading the trilogy at the moment and i have only one chapter to read at the end of Abhorsen! I loved all of them and i thought that ...

Herbs

Kailani felt the pain slowly receed from her head and everything became clear. she stood up suddenly, startling the surrounding pack and alans. 'Which way did Raiana go?' she asked. ...

wow! that is fantatic! i can't wait to see the finished version. :D

I would kill my boyfriend with a crowbar then bury him and my sister alive in a big pit of crabs. What would you do if you had rippeed you ...

Bricks

This is just the basic beginnings of an action story i am working on. I hope you enjoy and all critiques are welcome! Prologue The alarm began its screeching and ...

Wow! I really like this. It is really emotional. I like how you start it off with just a normal day and then get into the real meaning of the ...

Belle: The body and the dress are perfect! The rose is really nice and it really stands out. I think that the face is out of proportion and the jaw ...

I really like it. I think the best bit is the eyes. They are really realistic and they stand out really well against the gold!

Granted! But you forget your own. I wish i could writee dialogue

A modern drama story where someone tells so many lies they find it hard to dig themselves out. Not at the end