Saphira

Thank you for the critiques! I have made some changes which hopefully will make it better. I made it brief because a lot more gets told later. Thanks a lot! ...

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Mika looked at Nathan and Coden. They liked the plan wat to much and she wasn't going to let them have all the fun. 'Well i'm helping to' she stated. ...

(Sorry i havn't posted in awhile. My internet kept throwing me off so i was only on long enough to make a fiew posts) Kailani focused her power and teleported ...

I really like this. I ove the detail on the wings and the way they are positioned. I also loke the detail on the branch. It looks very life like ...

I realy liked this. It is really happy and cheery. I love all the colours and the imagery in the poem. I love it! :D

I don't like any of the Terry Pratchet books. I find them boring and Confusing. I got given loads of books by him before and just passed them on to ...

This is really good. You have kept on eith the charaters and the dialogue flowed really well. You also added in a lot more describtion which pulled together but kept ...

I thought this was really good. You kept to the characters really well and everythng seemed to flow. It was really good and you should carry on rting it, i ...

My brother introdced them to me and i didn't think i would enjoy them, but i did. I think that the book are much better than the film though.

Hey there and welcome to the site. I hope you like it here and if you need a critique or a help in hand just pm me. Saphira

HI! Welcome back! I love your poem. I can't wait to see more f your stuff! Saphira

Wow! I like all f them but my favourate has to be the coloured one. It looks really good. They are all fantastic! :D

9/10 I really like that! and so very true! If up is down but down isn't up, what is left?

Wow! I love them! i really like the poses they are in. They are really good.