Saphira

The describtion in this was fantastic and really detailed. I like how Sara's feelings are expressed and that you gave a history to start it of without doing a boring ...

Granted! But everyone around you is really sad I wish i could write poetry!

Alaura ran down the corridors, closely followed by the woman who she had met in the oracles room. Both ducked into a doorway as a guard went past. Before he ...

I actually liked this. I havn't read much abstract poetry but i liked this. I agree that some work needs to be done on the last stanza because it seems ...

Number three is my favourate because i like the stick people being bright and the background being dark.

This is really good. I think that it needs colour but it is very well drawn! Very funny! :D

wow those are fantastic. I love the poses and the ears on both are brilliant. I love the colour you have used and the skulls are fantastic. I also like ...

'You heard me?' Alaura was shocked. No one had ever heard her sneak up on them before, that is one of the reasons she was so successful. 'Ofcourse i heard ...

dele24 wrote: But if people think it is good enough to make a movie out of there may be something in it. I would just like to say that this ...

Granted! But it is in some other language so you read it but you don't understand it! I wish i wasn't ill

I hope not. Not that I know much about politics, but the Conservatives are not who get my vote.....(LOL. I'm underage so my vote doesn't even count, but still....). :D ...

Wow! That is really god. All the shadying looks fantastic and it is really good. I like the expressions and the poses though i think that the legs crossed looks ...

This seems really god so thought i would join. Name: Alaura Age: 16 Race: Human Gender: Female Appearance: Black hair and eyes. Small build but very strong and athletic. Personality: ...

I don't like it as much as the other fairies but it is still really good. I like the position and the detail on the wings though you still need ...

I like the first one though you need to make the 'Enough to live' easier to read (if that is ment to be read) or get rid of it. How ...