Saphira

The pose, chlothes and hair are fantastic and i really love all he detail. The proportions of the head need changing as the head, sholders and neck are to small ...

The first one is fantastic, i can't fault it. The postion and contrasts are just amazing. The secound is also really good. I like how everything is dark and the ...

KAilani appeared in the large tree city, tears streaming down her face and her tribe symbol blazing. The surrounding Dryad's were immediatly on thier feet, bows in hand, eah arrow ...

*woohoo! YWS is back on! I have been checking it for a week and i have just tried and it is working!* Alaura waited in the clearing as Zander circled ...

Alaura slumped to the floor as she failed, yet again, to teleport. Eliera had asked her to teleport to just near the house. Alaura had tryed but she couldn't do ...

*Shocked* I understand! I finally understand where it all came from! Woohoo!

I thought that this was okay. I agree with the comments made by Zafuel. I like that you have done the poem from Orik's veiwpoint. I think that is good ...

I liked it though i think that the structure needs working on. I think that the first stanza seems out of place when you compare it to the content of ...

Hmm...Interesting. I like how it i scribbly and the different proportions are good. I think that it would look good with a background.

I would walk up to him and say, 'Well it's your loss'. and walk away. Actually that's a lie. I would start sabontaging his books and then put posters all ...

*An interesting twist, even though it is a sad one :( * Kailani could hardly breath. She turned from Raiana as grief overwhelmed her. She thought about what had happened. ...

Alaura got a blanket from the ruins of the house and gently covered Eliera and turned to Zander. 'I'm not sure' she lied. She couldn't tell him, not without Eliera's ...

Alaura stepped forward and talked fast to try and get through to Eliera before she decided to leave. The woman had not moved since she had seen Eliera do magic. ...

This is really good. I like the negative colours and the position of the man in the picture. Very modern, which is properbly why i like it so much. Very ...

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