Saphira

This is good and the face is really good but i agree that the angle of the head is awkward. Also it looks like he has nearly no neck. It ...

I like this. It looks like Orlando Bloom and the eyes are brilliant. I do agree that the lines need to be darker but there is enough there to critique. ...

7/10. I like it. Very mysterious...

I think that the third one is the best. Working into a flashback slowly and making the writing flow better. I quite like the idea of writing FLASHBACK ALERT! but ...

I would run around screaming before cracking my head ona lamp post. What would you do if some random person came up to you and said they would publish your ...

Name: Clarissa Age: 23 Race: Vampire Gender: Female Appearance: Personality: Intelligent yet acts otherwise. She can be sarcastic and has a sardonic sense of humour. History: Nothing is known of ...

Flowers and a Romantic song. Maybe him singing it to her as she leans over the balcony. (see above :) )

Docters

5/10. Its alright.

I tried to read the book after i saw the show in Manchester. I thought the show was absolutly amazing and the story gripped me though i found the protrayal ...

I have just finished reading 'The Bourne Supremacy' by Robert Ludlum. It is amazing and really fast paced. A lot more confusing than the film!

All the colours are amazing and i quite like it uncropped. I love the shot and all that. Bravo! Saphira

Amazing! The colours are just fantastic and all the proportions look good. Very good and you deserve five stars for that! :smt005 * * * * * Saphira

Wow this is really good. I don't know what else to say! Keep it up!

Hey Pn! Sorry it has taken me so long to critique. Everyone has pretty much covered the typos and grammer so i will just put down what i think of ...