Sannah

Thank you for the feedback! Ok, I fixed it and added punctuation, meaning I probably now have too many grammar problems to count... And the thing about there being only ...

I think you should put an extra line in-between each paragraph though; it is hard to tell when a paragraph begins and where it ends. Some of your sentences were ...

I am not really sure what kind of poem this is so I put it in other poetry. Corners "Why are you standing in the corner?" Cause that's all I ...

About what PurifyingFire said... Susannah follows Sannah like a shadow but it is really Susannah who overshadows Sannah no matter how hard she tries or what she does. Sannah just ...

That was really good. I liked it a lot. Emera reminded me of a certain someone and her brother reminded me of another certain someone (Ranger51 is going to be ...

Thank you for the advice. I put a line in-between each paragraph like you said and it is much easier to read now.

That is amazing...! You wrote that? Wow... And you're only 13. I can't wait to read some of your other works. :) I love how you incorporated French in your ...

That was really good... It very nearly made me cry. And sadly, that was probably because I realized that I think more like the poem going top to bottom... I ...

If you read it now, you will see that I am not done editing it. I wrote the original then decided it needs some changing. I am trying to improve ...

Wow! I really liked your story. It was cool how you showed he was a normal guy living a normal life like anybody else but how you made him feel ...

Thank you for the feedback! :) I was afraid nobody would even bother reading it... "I also liked your bravery for writing a poem without rhyming" Honestly, I doubt I ...

Hello! I really liked your story. :) There were only a few errors with quotation marks, comas, and period placement. I thought it was cool how you switched from Felicity ...

I loved it!!! That was amazing. It brought tears to my eyes and made my heart beat a million miles a minute. Your poem left a beautiful message. When it ...

My real name is actually Susannah but I've been calling myself Sannah since I was one or two... and that is what this is about. My frustrations of role call ...