Sandvich

PsychoRapunsel

Banned for using a creepy smiley.

Kasis "Pig." I spat at the man's mangled corpse. I stopped the wheel, and admired my work. Not the most artistic death, but it did the job. It was then ...

Kasis The Jasmine woman had told me some interesting things. I'd been expecting more, though. Oh well. There'll be another time, I told myself. And she's the only spy you ...

Banned for falsifying your location.

Absolute rubbish! I kid, it's quite good. I explained all the problems to you at school. Your style fits with the scenes quite well, and you write half decent action ...

Banned for having no signature.

Kasis I cliked my tongue. She was late. I sat on a cannon, turning it with my mind absent mindedly. I often did that when I was irritated. Losing control ...

BY THE POWER OF GREYSKULL! Hmm, what? Oh, that? Don't worry about that. Just me being stupid. Your story is short. Short and sweet. I like that. Howeverm like I've ...

Dead Space – Security One Josef screamed and struggled, but to no avail. The man, no, creature on top of him slashed at his exposed neck with blades protruding from ...

Lol, I don't know why I chose that title either. It just seemed abstract and that. It also fitted with the previous structure of it where it was just about ...

Instead of typing up reviews on all three of the changed and uploaded chapters, I will just review them here. Is that ok? Just kidding, I'm going to anyway :3 ...

Good evening =P You say you're rubbish at writing? You, my friend, need to get your facts staright. This is one of the best poems I've seen, and I'm not ...

Kasis "Excellent! Now, let me just explain for a moment." I cleared my throat. This was the moment of truth. "As you... probably don't... know, I have spies everywhere. Kind ...

Kasis "What makes you think I can trust you?" I grinned. "Well, of course, you can never know for sure if you can trust someone. Learned that when I was ...