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Re: Captian Guido (Chapter Two)
Chapter Two The Arnham Inn was a small structure. It had been built during the Anarchic Era, a time many years ago when the kingdom had dissolved into chaos due ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Colin Strider Chapter One
Good eve, chap. I shall be reviewing your literary work today. Firstly, I enjoyed the piece as a whole. In the beginning, you developed Colin as a character quite indirectly; ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Captain Guido (Chapter One)
One I’ve served as a surgeon for many years now. I’ve treated missing limbs, arrow wounds and crushed bones. I’ve seen caved and cleaved skulls, men who have already begun ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Three Stupid Choices (Prologue, Chapter One)
This is amazing. I love the way you've written it from the point of view of the character and actually made them human. A lot of the time, when I ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Godfather Death - A Retelling
[Rated 12 for sinister themes? O_o] Hi. So I've got to make an adaptation of a classic tale for my English homework, so I'm doing a 'dark' retelling of Godfather ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Top Ten Reasons Why Women Are Better Than Men!
Top 10 reasons why Women are better than men Rating: 18+ 10. We don't have a penis. - This means that we are capable of thinking with our brains. Contrary ...
Dec 8, 2010 -
Re: When a theory is proven or disproven, is it still a theory?
[Sandvich] 8:17 pm: But all theories, whether they are true or not, are just that - theories, speculation - until they are proven or disproven, at which point they become ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: Nom Nom Nom
Hello there. My name's Sandvich, and you just stumbled across my failthread. Well done. :) Anyway, as I said, my name's Sandvich. I'm thirteen and three-quaters. I'm a Brit, so ...
Nov 2, 2010 -
Re: Review Day October 2010 Check-In
...I did one. And that wasn't even a good one. I suck. Same. =/
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Old Story
A soft banging sounded against my door. "Come in," I said lightly, not looking up from the novel that I had my eyes planted on for the last hour. The ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: The Legacy of Hope
Short but sweet. I like it. I'm not exactly 'teh awesomez' at poems, so I'll try not to give you bad tips. I especially like your use of similies. However, ...
Oct 28, 2010 -
Re: the incredibal icecube
The Incredible Ice Cube I remember it was year 88 B.C. and I was running from the other kids in the tribe. I was running and tripped and fell on ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Left 4 Dead - The Beginning
Left 4 Dead is some serious awesome stuff. ;) Well anyway, I'm Moo, and I couldn't resist reviewing this once I saw the title. :P I hope I manage to ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Left 4 Dead - The Beginning
Very nice start to a story. I haven't played Left 4 Dead personally, but I'm familiar with the zombie apocalypse premise. You've done a good job with it. Now, for ...
Oct 14, 2010 -
Re: Twilight - A Reality.
That was some crap!!! I hated it im going to put my story on here and put urs to shame!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hahahahahhahahhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh
Oct 13, 2010
