Sandstorm

Hey MckieC a very enjoyable start to the novel, I definitely want to know more! I found that for someone in denial like London she might have needed more convincing ...

Really liked it, I find the idea of reincarnation fascinating; so you had my attention from the get go. I couldn't see any problems with the grammar, and I found ...

Hey I really liked the story, it seems well written. I did notice you reused some words quite close together, such as mesmerized. But it reads really well actually I ...