Samara

Life, Love, and the Pursuit of Happiness Kylee has never been exactly like everyone else, but she doesn't realize how different she is until she enrolls in public high school ...

10/10 i don't know what it is...but i like it :).

10/10 we're going in circles here lol.

hey, i really like this. keep it up. just a few suggestions. "I was pretty much pissed the rest of the day, then I got home." i'm thinking you need ...

lol. 8/10.

Posted: Wed May 30, 2007 3:30 pm Post subject: Re: AWritersFantasy's Corner of Writing -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- 1. Do you outline? no, but i do

8/10 neat.

hahahahahaha. i like it 9/10 (my avatar is Aslan. yay for C. S. Lewis) ;)

its a spade, right? (i'm so bad with card thingys...) 6/10. not enormously unique, but i like it.

i'm very confused....

sorry, i posted on the science fiction forum, but i will review again. you're thirteen, right? ok, so realizing that you're thirteen, i totally can see that you have potential, ...

4 Dax: On a Mission We needed food. The meager paycheck that usually got us through the month hadn’t come this time. Dad was late to work one day, the ...

:( :( :( i'm so sorry.! don't never be friends again! friendship is better than relationships anyway. stay friends, and maybe something will happen in the future.

i agree to some extent with biancaryne...the wording could be a little different. i mean, you don't have to sound like you're writing an Arthurian legend. make it personal. make ...

Rae had never, ever been scared before in her life. Having a father who worked with wild griffins teaches you fearlessness. But she understood fear now. Griffins and riders were ...