Samara

ok, i agree with not sugarcoating stuff, but at the same time, we do have to understand that a thirteen-year-old's piece of writing ISN'T going to be as good, simply ...

(grrr...somebody should kidnap my character or kill her off in a really dramatic way. i can't keep up. can she like get dragged into the scary underground world or something? ...

"I like almost any music. I love hits from the 40s (don't laugh at me). They're just so sweet, really beautiful songs. 'Come Rain or Come Shine' is probably one ...

bad. What do you like about the nighttime?

"Uh...well, let's see...leading on my best friend, succumbing to depression at least three time in my life (yes, i know, shocking), those not-very-nice thoughts i had about Sammy when she ...

*glares* it was a hypothetical question! lol. jk. no, i have one very close to finished, but i still have another chapter or two. at any rate, i haven't been ...

story of a prophet or a soothsayer or something. fantasy. Meltdown (p.s. do you have any better ideas for my title than Touch of Fire? *is desperate* if you want ...

"Yes...but I have a tendency to talk to everyone." ~Kylee "Um...not really, no. Unless you have food." ~Marc "Did someone say food?" ~Dax Where did your authors get the idea ...

somebody gets hurt, in every way imagineable. Pawprints (also very random...)

umm...yeah, pretty much everyone else said what I was thinking. the fact that you said mouth twice, the need to move the rating to R, and the slightly unbelievable characters. ...

makes me seriously wonder what Footlights are :D. i like it. Butterfly Kisses (haha, totally just made that up off the top of my head).

^ that's a great tip, Sam. There are very few stories that are completely original. But you can make an old IDEA original by twisting it.

"I love you." (and there is no sequel.)

sounds like a memoir to me. like an old lady looking back on the winter she was 20 or something. Touch of Fire (this is the title of my longest ...

very nice rant :). i agree.